Excellent, professional portrait. All the elements work very well: diagonal composition, lighting gradation of the BG from dark to bright, soft focus, relaxed expression and a perfect exposure. PRO
°°° celle °°°
03/01/2006 14:15
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to much overlightning on the left side , but good expression...
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Nice sellable graduation picture. Soft make-up, skin tones, and cute hair. The sweater doesn't work well with the surrounding and distracts from the face. As for a portrait gallery shot I think it's over softened for her age, the over exposed areas are very distracting, the eyes are going off in an unnatural position, her face is smashed giving it some distortion, her expression is a bit uncomfortable and her body position seems uncomfortable. Think silver necklace breaks up her beautiful neck line and distracts. Bit of folaige on the sleeve seems like an oversight. Her top hand could have been posed neater.
How to fix. Reserve the soft focus for older ladies that need a bit more correction to conseal fine lines and wrinkles, camera angle a little more to the right would have calmed down the over exposure by the sun, the eye cut is overdone - a little more towards the camera would have given a better effect, have the model hold the face just next to the arm - not right on it. Bringing up her body posture a bit would have given a more geometric composition to her body.
Tighter crop gives a nicer product.
Robert Riley
03/01/2006 14:15
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Sergio Pessolano 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
Excellent, professional portrait. All the elements work very well: diagonal composition, lighting gradation of the BG from dark to bright, soft focus, relaxed expression and a perfect exposure. PRO°°° celle °°° 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
to much overlightning on the left side , but good expression...skip
Anastasiya Ivanova 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
ProWhen 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
Nice sellable graduation picture. Soft make-up, skin tones, and cute hair. The sweater doesn't work well with the surrounding and distracts from the face. As for a portrait gallery shot I think it's over softened for her age, the over exposed areas are very distracting, the eyes are going off in an unnatural position, her face is smashed giving it some distortion, her expression is a bit uncomfortable and her body position seems uncomfortable. Think silver necklace breaks up her beautiful neck line and distracts. Bit of folaige on the sleeve seems like an oversight. Her top hand could have been posed neater.How to fix. Reserve the soft focus for older ladies that need a bit more correction to conseal fine lines and wrinkles, camera angle a little more to the right would have calmed down the over exposure by the sun, the eye cut is overdone - a little more towards the camera would have given a better effect, have the model hold the face just next to the arm - not right on it. Bringing up her body posture a bit would have given a more geometric composition to her body.
Tighter crop gives a nicer product.
Robert Riley 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
Always been my favourite of Danny's Pic's. PROJosep A. Collado 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
Nice but, sincerely, not for the galleryColin Karpeta 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
A classic portrait. ProJan Van Der Hooft 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
Super portrait, PROsteffen s... 03/01/2006 14:15 Comentario de la votación
excellent classic portrait - background, colors, softener... and modelshould - by my opinion - have a place in the gallery
Robin J 01/01/2006 14:58
very nice picture... soo smooooth and soft =)Kinga Duchnowska 28/12/2005 22:33
excellent pic... great soft lights, i like it very muchrgrds!
n o r B Ä R t 26/12/2005 20:08
very beautifulIgor Eugeny Urmin 20/12/2005 9:34
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das bild ist auch gut gemacht!..Peter Kis kalóz 16/12/2005 7:05
Hello Danny!Crystalclear eyes, soft lights, beautiful portrait. Congratulations, Peter