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mk.pixelstorm

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mk.pixelstorm desea expresamente feedback constructivo para esta fotografía. Ayúdalo con consejos sobre la composición de la imagen, la técnica, el lenguaje de la imagen, etc. (Por favor, ¡ten en cuenta el código de conducta!).

Prisma-photo 06/01/2019 12:19
Welcome on FC !
I take the opportunity of your feedback request to propose you my inputs on this photo.
I like very much the idea and its realization. Great lighting on your beautiful model and interesting toning + textures.
I am however disappointed by the disturbing background : the poles, the houses,... I would probably have considered a lower point of view and / or cropped the upper part of the image. It is leading to lose the sky, which is nice, but I believe this would make a stronger image empowering your model.
Regards,
Prisma
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- mk.pixelstorm 08/01/2019 7:49
  Thank you very much for the time and effort to tell me your opinion. After looking at it in consideration of your comment, I have to agree with you. Less background and either cropping or less distance to the model would bring more attention to her. (sorry for my bad english)
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