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sailor's tales

A Sailor went sailing
One stormy night.

the black sky was lit by lightning.
A wave rushed up

And his boat was overturned.
The Sailor awoke

To find himself lying
In the arms of a beautiful maiden.

Trust in me
And I'll take you to places never seen.

Oh beautiful maid
Please take me to shore

For a wife and children have I.
Forget them now,

She said with a cunning smile.
I'll show you sights

Never seen before,
But you must give me all your trust.

but a promise I make
To take you to your true home this night.

He smiled up,
She smiled down,

And his trust was given to her.
She held him tighter

So to not lose him in the storm.
Her smile turned

To evil insanity
As she dragged him beneath the waves.

They disappeared
And the water engulfed them.

Sailors tell the story
Though how they heard

No one will ever discover.
The story of a lost Sailor

And his beautiful maiden killer.

A Sailor's Story
© By Kristin J. Geditz **EXPRESSIONS 1**

Comentarios 8

  • kgeditz 17/06/2012 22:01

    Hello. Sorry that I am not writing in German. I do not know any German. I had to translate this page a lot to write a comment. I wrote the poem. I wanted to say I really like the artwork you made to go with it. Very well done.
  • Barbara Neider 20/03/2009 23:45

    gruselig schaurig schön
  • Steffen Kuehn 27/08/2007 15:16

    Mystisch und unglaublich gut bearbeitet ! Allein die Farben sprechen schon für sich, was das Motiv gekonnt abrundet.
    LG; Steffen
  • Rolf Regler 26/08/2007 19:53

    Ein gut gemachtes Bild
    lg Rolf
  • Mirco1 Schneider 26/08/2007 9:50

    jetzt bin ich aber beeindruckt absolut genial super gemacht schöne bea

    lg mirco
  • .Gato Miguel. 26/08/2007 9:19

    Das sieht echt cool aus mit diesem Kreuz und Anker als Halskette :)
    Gut gemacht
    Gruß
    Miguel
  • Gebhard Asman 25/08/2007 21:13

    wirklich geiles Bild
    bin begeistert
  • M Mayer 25/08/2007 20:19

    Das ist mit abstand Deine beste Arbeit!! Vor allem da ich weiss wie lang Du daran gebastelt hast!! ;-) In kombination mit dem Gedicht ist es absolut Top!!!

    Knuuuutsch Mike