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The Explorers

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Stu Good

Free Account, Southampton

The Explorers

Two guys in a canoe seen on the River Hamble, April 2007.
Sony a100.
Critique Welcome.

Daren Borzynski 21/04/2007 14:06
Very nice scene Stu
The light on the boat is great... well captured.
I think the greens look great.
I would consider 2 different crops worth trying...
1st... a small crop to remove the bit of blue above the trees.
2nd.. you could try a much tighter crop... pull the top right down and removing all the blue sky showing through the trees.... also a littl bit off the left to bring the boat across that way more & to remove the bit of wood in the water that just touches the frame.

Not a criticism.. but just maybe worth trying!!

Cheers!!
Daren
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Sissi Blume 20/04/2007 19:11
I love canoeing !!!
Great picture!
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Edgar Sousa 20/04/2007 12:49
in this one your sky is blue wich its great but still a bad green! if you edit the picture and try to pull up the green in trees and leave there brown it will be not so confusious!

sorry my english to explain stuff :p
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