Tyne Bridge
Innocent eyes
Persistent bridges.
How many confusion has been witnessed and exposed
By the pale yellow behind the hustle and bustle.
Through gaps between pillars
Ruthless days are running unconsciously.
Innocent eyes,
Unstable life.
markkeville 07/03/2018 15:34
I would say there is not a lot of hustle and bustle in the image.Perhaps the poem should be about structures , pattern, construction, layers of time.
Having said that - i see what you are getting at. This is an image of order and balance.
I suppose the bridges indicate a sense of social order and purpose. I hadn't thought of that before. The shape of the bridges is more usually regarded as a homage or adornment to the river , celbrating and emphasising the river's importance.
To me - the bridges are like a ribbon tied in a bow.
How "high falutin" can you get ? - to use a cowboy phrase.
markkeville 07/03/2018 15:27
send the original to me by email as a jpeg - and I'll show you how you might crop it.